Deluxeejuice Posted December 6, 2014 Share Posted December 6, 2014 My site http://deluxeejuice.com has been a work in progress for the past 40 days or so, and is now opened and doing pretty well actually. Lots of on-site reviews. My problem is that I never get feedback on my site as a whole, just on my products. I would love to hear any constructive criticism or suggestions you may have. I am brand new to this and any input is appreciated. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CutiePengu Posted December 6, 2014 Share Posted December 6, 2014 Can you explain to me what exactly an ejuice is? Most people think of e-anything as being Internet online related. I'm sorry, but maybe its just me, but ejuice sounds really weird to me. I realize you say "e-liquid and e-juice" on your site, but what exactly does that mean? Please, enlighten me. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Deluxeejuice Posted December 6, 2014 Author Share Posted December 6, 2014 Yeah, sure. E-juice or E-liquid is the fluid you add to an electronic cigarette. It commonly has three major components: An agent to produce the vapor, Nicotine for obvious reasons and flavorings to add flavor. All of the components except the nicotine would be considered safe for use in food products. There are two types of agents that can be used to create vapor. PG - Propylene Glycol is the most common. VG - Vegetable Glycerin is used, usually, by people with allergies or sensitivity to PG. Thanks for taking a look at my site, but like I said in the o.p. - I am not looking for reviews on my products (or what's in them), I am more or less looking for anything in general that can help with structure or SEO. First website and I am really green to this whole experience. For my customers who might have the same question you have, i have a blog on the same site to explain everything to them. Thanks again CutiePengu. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Paulito Posted December 6, 2014 Share Posted December 6, 2014 Hello Well, I happy to hear that your site is successful, as for constructive criticism their are perhaps a few things I would change. 1. Your top navigation looks too empty, it would, perhaps, look better if the text was centred 2. Their is little to no information on your "Information" pages. 3. I would have both delivery methods (unsigned and signed for) visible on the shipping section of the checkout rather than ask a customer to email for prices. 4 I do not see a lot of social media on your site apart from Facebook, it can do you a lot of good to have links on reddit,linkedin,twitter, tumblr, pintrest, askfm etc etc. 5. Not sure I like your email address, it is not relevant to deluxeejuice.com 6. I can't see many calls to action on your pages. 7. Considering how few products you sell their are too many "New Products" in your left sidebar. 8. On every page you have the same text wrapped in H1 Tags, not sure if that's a good idea Anyway, best of luck Paul 3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
razaro Posted December 6, 2014 Share Posted December 6, 2014 Hi It looks nice, good use of default theme. Most of images are great choice. And while I was thinking what to write Paulito give some points that I would said also. Top menu is empty, you have blog, great, add link to it there. Social just Facebook, both in footer and on product page ? You are missing potential customers. Email in footer, agreed with Paulito again. That " Deluxe ejuice premium..." looks good on homepage but not needed on other pages. Especially on product page where beside it takes a lot of room and on lower resolution you would even miss image when page load, it also as H1 conflict with real H1 - product name. Product name that is optimized for SEO. 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CutiePengu Posted December 7, 2014 Share Posted December 7, 2014 Even though my site is a new site as well, I do agree with Paulito & Razaro. This is one reason why I asked what exactly e-juice was. I looked for something to tell me, but there was nothing. Had you had a link to your blog explaining this, I wouldn't have asked you what it was. I also agree with the other 2 on the rest of their comments. Especially the e-mail. Though I only have CutiePengu in my email address on my shop, it is because it is an extremely long name, and I didn't have any other way of shortening it, because had I just used CPBJC in front of the email, people would have thought it were going to who-knows-where. At least by me putting the first "major" word in my site as part of the e-mail, at least they know that I will be the one getting it. But the rest, as I stated above, I agree with the gentlemen. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Deluxeejuice Posted December 7, 2014 Author Share Posted December 7, 2014 Thank for all your feedback. That is exactly what I wanted to hear. I knew it needed work still, just unsure where. I do have a link to my blog in the footer, but apparently I need to make it more visible. I will most definitely work on ALL the issues you guys brought up and then I will re-submit it to you guys again until I get it right Thanks so much for taking time out of your day to help analyze my site, it is much appreciated! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Deluxeejuice Posted December 7, 2014 Author Share Posted December 7, 2014 I know how to make all the great suggestions mentioned above work, except one. I know it is a really easy fix, but being a newbie, am having a hard time. I did search for the solution before coming back here to ask, as I really hate asking for help for something so easy. My problem deals with the h1 tags. I have only added the one h1 tag on my header.tpl My question is - how exactly - step by step - how do I stop that h1 tag from appearing on all my pages? The h1 tag I am referring to is " Deluxe ejuice premium e-liquid is your place for all your e-liquid and e-juice needs. With over 50 ejuice flavors and adding more eliquid flavors every day." It is showing in all my pages as you guys have mentioned, but do not know how to only keep it on main page and not the others. I really do HONESTLY appreciate your help, thanks so much. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Paulito Posted December 7, 2014 Share Posted December 7, 2014 Hello Well, the first thing I would do is remove the H1 tag from the header.tpl, you will not then have too many H1 tags throughout your site. Prestashop has already done the tag work for you by automatically using this tag in your product titles, the same goes for H2, H3 etc. If you must add another H1 tag to you Home/Index page then the easiest thing to do is use the default Home Editorial Module. Hope this helps a little Paul 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Deluxeejuice Posted December 7, 2014 Author Share Posted December 7, 2014 (edited) Thanks so much for your help and suggestions Paulito. The only reason I added that H1 tag to the header.tpl is because according to Bing, I was missing it and they said it was urgent that I add one. I am using Pestashop 1.6 and do not see the module 'home editorial module', but for starters I will remove the h1 from my header.tpl Thanks again. Edited December 7, 2014 by Deluxeejuice (see edit history) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
razaro Posted December 7, 2014 Share Posted December 7, 2014 Just begin to type home in module search it will show Home text editor. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Deluxeejuice Posted December 7, 2014 Author Share Posted December 7, 2014 Thanks for the reply razaro. I have already tried that but only come up with Featured products on the homepage and image slider for homepage. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Paulito Posted December 7, 2014 Share Posted December 7, 2014 (edited) Hello How about using a really good Free Module from here: http://mypresta.eu/modules/front-office-features/european-union-cookie-law.html Download it, add a few words http://screencast.com/t/JKwbiaux Source code http://screencast.com/t/vpvciQaKBTgM Result http://screencast.com/t/sMF4pzRP You can of course change all the colours etc, even have it scrolling Hope this helps EDIT: Forget this idea, it's basically the same as you had before. I think I need a liquid lunch !!! Paul Edited December 7, 2014 by Paulito (see edit history) 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
razaro Posted December 7, 2014 Share Posted December 7, 2014 Strange you do not have it, if it is got deleted download from https://github.com/PrestaShop/editorial/archive/master.zip and install. And if you already edited header.tpl, looks you are ok with FTP and editing files, so you could do this another way. Move that code to index.tpl file, that way it also will be displayed on homepage only. 1 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Deluxeejuice Posted December 7, 2014 Author Share Posted December 7, 2014 Wow Paulito, thanks for your hard work man, really appreciated. I will have to try to figure this out later, time to hit the sack for the night. Thanks all for your input, have a busy tomorrow but will log in at some point in the near future. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Deluxeejuice Posted December 7, 2014 Author Share Posted December 7, 2014 Caught me just in time razaro. Thank you so much for your help and I will give that a go on index.tpl and look into downloading the file you gave a link for. Thanks a bunch. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Deluxeejuice Posted December 7, 2014 Author Share Posted December 7, 2014 Update: Problem resolved I knew there would be an easy fix. I edited the index.tpl like razaro suggested and worked perfectly. Many thanks. And thank you Paulito for the hard work you put in on trying to solve this for me. You guys are awesome. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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